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    Thought this might be an interesting thread. Be creative! Rules for Haiku: first line is 5 syllables; 2nd line is 7 syllables; last line is 5 syllables again.

    Ok.

    Here's mine:

    It's time for my meds.
    They say, "But you don't LOOK sick..."
    Sigh, I take my pills.

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    I live day to day
    In mourning for the old me.
    Never ending pain.
    "Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind." Dr. Suess

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    Have something to do
    Hold still that rocking canoe
    Too late for now; sank!

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    A bright sunny day
    Everything is beautiful
    But I run for shade

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    oh this pain today
    i wish it would go away
    oh well, here to stay
    I intend to live forever, so far so good

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    Today I will pay;
    Used all my spoons yesterday
    But it was worth it.

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    Fever and rash gone
    Prednisone meds kicked their butts :lol:
    Darn fatique kicks mine :x

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    Well, this has proven to be quite a challenge for this "brain fogged" girl, (Laughing out loud)....so here's my little ditty.

    Where are those old days
    When I used to remember
    Brain fog clouds those days

    Much love,
    Browneyedgirl
    "I believe that friends are quiet angels who lift us to our feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." - unknown

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    This thread is fun. When I couldn't sleep last night I was composing Haiku in my head We SHOULD publish these ....we're all very talented and it gives a good picture of how Lupus affects our lives. Awesome idea!

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    Thank God for my friends.
    They always understand me,
    even when I'm down.

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